Writing from a different first-person point of view was a bit tricky, and I worked on making sure that Doug's perspective didn't sound exactly like Jen's. Also writing what amounts to a self-contained short story is a harder task than writing a regular chapter.
Nice portrayal of what Jen is up against. Kind of feel bad for Doug though.
Thanks! And poor Doug, he never really had a chance!
[[AUTHOR'S NOTE]]
Writing from a different first-person point of view was a bit tricky, and I worked on making sure that Doug's perspective didn't sound exactly like Jen's. Also writing what amounts to a self-contained short story is a harder task than writing a regular chapter.